Possible Pitch Idea

1. Starts with a view of the environment (which in this case is the kitchen
and bathroom)
2. Character is introduced via the hands and begins a cleaning
ritual/regime
3. Then a new establish shot is shown of the character leaving. As a way
of showing a new day
4. A group of people, a person waves, but the character keeps her distance.
5. Will in class someone bumps into her a spill some unknown substance on
her.
6. The character freaks out and can be seen washing hands in restroom
7. Another shot of her home; she can be seen frantically cleaning but more
extreme to an extent
8.shows her leaving again but this time she is prepared.
9. she drops her prize gloves into a mud or some unknown puddle.
10. She hesitant to pick up the gloves
11. Finally reaches down to pickup the gloves
12. Stares intently at the gloves
13. walks away

The GodFather I

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eCJ2zguWPrs&feature=related

Here's Some of my inspiration. As far from my idea as this is, I like how the they

use their environment. Its the same yellow ornate environment that makes up the presence

of the movie. The movie is entirely based off the presence.